7. The Lighthouse in the Mountain
Beam guiding light your rays upon the plains. Cut loose the souls ensnared in darkish chains. Through brambles, weeds, shrubs, trees and ripened grains, Lead on their steps to homeward paths and...
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Jose, though it seems you have a firm grasp of the sonnet form, I think you're stuck in an antiquated style here. I'd much rather hear about some actual thing that is actually touching your life, than...
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Mary Meriam wrote: Jose, though it seems you have a firm grasp of the sonnet form, I think you're stuck in an antiquated style here. I'd much rather hear about some actual thing that is actually...
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Interesting to see your variations on the form. I think it's near-impossible, though, to compose a successful sonnet in monorhyme. You might find it easier to start with the Shakespearian form, since...
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jrmr wrote: readers may find this piece beyond the ken of their understanding, appreciation or interest. but as far as my purpose is concerned, i have achieved the end which i sought to my fullest...
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